
He had warned her about the book.
Now it was too late. It was on the very first page. In massive black letters.
Beware. Beware. He'd done all he could. She never woke up. Her eyes stayed shut, clamped tightly
together under the weight of the spell. She wasn’t going to wake up. Not now,
not again. He knew this much. He couldn't help but feel satisfied. Liberated. That
was a better word, more descriptive. He almost laughed. If anyone knew
about words, it was him. He stood over her bed as the vines and plant-life
growing from the book began to engulf her, really engulf her. Even if the idea
of her demise was pleasing, he was glad she was in a state of slumber. Nothing
was worse than being awake when it happened. He still remembered. He remembered
screaming and shouting and seeing no response from his family. They looked right
through him. He wasn’t real anymore. They’d be dead now, dead for hundreds of
years. He wondered how his mother passed, how old his father lived to, who his
sister had married. He’d never know. He didn’t really recall them now. He couldn’t
think of their names. They were blurry, surrounded in a perpetual kind of fog in
his mind. But he knew once they’d been blood. Even if his existence with them
was wiped away. He watched as the girl’s arm slid into the book. A blinding
light shown from the vines and flowers. It had started. She still didn’t wake
up. But how could she? The book was being merciful. Even it knows that there’s
nothing more painful than ceasing to exist. And it’s a different kind of pain.
It’s the empty kind, the bleak kind. The kind that throws you into an abyss. He
sometimes thinks he recollects what it was like to be tangible, to be a measurable
form. He knew it was probably just his imagination, the book playing tricks on
him. The book has a sense of humor. You could feel it laughing at you once you
were inside. Once it had lured you into its prison. She’d know that laughter
soon. He wondered how she’d react. The real curse of the book isn’t the book
itself. It’s everyone else. Whoever reads the book is trapped, and the other
poor soul is released. So the story never really gets told. It’s sort of just
known, a little piece of it ingrained in everyone’s mind. No one really knows
how it got there and no one will notice when it vanishes. She won’t even be free to be caged. Maybe he should burn the book. He’d considered it while he
was waiting. He fantasized about going to a fireplace and destroying it
forever. But what would happened to her? He cocked his head, almost her entire
torso was sucked in. Her legs too. He wondered how she’d be described. Would
they mention her hair? She had the most beautiful hair. He still knew how the
book once described him. It had focused on his eyes. Every five pages, there
had to be something about his eyes. But he himself had forgotten what color
they really were long ago. Once the girl was gone, he’d cover this room in
mirrors. He’d look at his eyes at least five times a day. He’d never forget
again. The vines were wrapping around her shoulders. He was so close. He was so
close to freedom. He smiled, for the first time in centuries. What would her
title be? His was Prince of Water’s End. Children loved him once, he was every
little girl’s first love and sparked the first hint of jealously in little
boys. When the children got older, they looked back on him and smile. They’d say
that they remembered reading him in school, and watching the cartoon adaption
of his life on television. But he wasn’t really there. And when he was
forgotten, no one would really take notice. The book pulled her closer, her neck
contorting as it descended. She wouldn’t even be a memory anymore. She’d be
nothing more than a silly fairy-tale. A character. She was still sleeping, he
could hear her quite breaths become sharp. She was struggling. His stomach
began to sink. Suddenly he wanted to stop it, stop all of this. But then he
didn’t want to stop anything, he just wanted it to go faster. Then he wanted to
close the book and decimate it and throw the tattered pages into the wind. Her
head was gone now, all that remained was one eyes and a cheekbone. He let out a
deep sigh. That’s when it happened. The eye opened. She was awake, vibrantly
awake. The book had woken her up at the very last minute. He gasped and covered
his mouth. That one eye could hold so much emotion. Horror. Confusion.
Betrayed. The book lingered on her eyes, waiting a while before finally
swallowing her and closing itself. He sank to his knees. That was the book’s
way of punishing him. He stayed slumped on the floor for some time. Then he
reached up. He wanted to see the title. She deserved that much. He reached up and pulled the book from the
bed. The title wasn’t written in any real language. She’d been written by Charles
Perrault. And by The Brothers Grimm. And then later by Walt Disney. It fit her.
And the book was laughing. “Sleeping Beauty.”
Nice twist on an old tale! I enjoyed this very much!
ReplyDeleteHi, Taylor! What a haunting story! That poor man, having to watch as the girl got sucked into the book (especially in the final moments), but still want to be free himself. You did an amazing job of showing his internal struggle at seeing the girl get sucked into the book, and his desire to be free of it. I also loved how you made the book come to life, saying that it would laugh at them, cause them pain, etc. I was also unprepared for the twist at the end, and had to read it a couple of times to make sure that I read it correctly. It was just so shocking! The poor girl! Hopefully, her prince charming will come and save her soon. Lovely writing!
ReplyDeleteMeghan
I like the way you drew out her sinking into the book, making the narrator's experience more excruciating. And I love the ending, the book laughing, the legendary title taking on a new, ironic meaning with the lovely girl's painful demise.
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor,
ReplyDeletei really liked the sentence "He fantasized about going to a fireplace and destroying it forever" because it really pops in the story and it fits well within the story. i really like the last sentence because i dont know about you but i thought it was funny.